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Postby firestar_Recca_man » Tue Jan 25, 2005 2:45 am

I have to wright a paper on Tim Burton and well it sucks so far so if anyone wants to help i would thak them very much... or you can lock it



Tim Burton

Filmmaker, writer, animator, screenwriter, and favorite director Tim Burton demonstrates the Pine Creek High School character traits integrity, courage and excellence. He was born August 15, 1958. He grew up in Burbank, California aka Suburbia “anywhere USAâ€
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Postby WindChildFuko » Tue Jan 25, 2005 4:11 am

I also have that book. Id put more in the beginning about him being an outcast and not fitting in and finding refuge in horror movies. Also, the last paragraph is sloppy. Dont say"in conclusion" it sounds like 5th grade step up to writing.
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Postby firestar_Recca_man » Tue Jan 25, 2005 5:15 am

We have the same book(burton on burton)i got it first you pooper! but that you and i will put more.
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Postby Chris » Tue Jan 25, 2005 8:13 pm

>> If this takes up to much band with them tell me and i will delete it

I'm pretty sure that it won't sap up bandwidth. We have lots of it to use... the bigger topics use more resources, such as the forum games. :)

Good work BTW. :)

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Postby firestar_Recca_man » Tue Jan 25, 2005 9:37 pm

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I was just cheacking
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Postby Naminé » Wed Jan 26, 2005 6:03 pm

I would fix this paper, but being in an AP English class, I would have to totally change the entire paper structure (since I don't use this kind of set-up anymore). Sorry.

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Postby WindChildFuko » Thu Jan 27, 2005 12:29 am

Another thing I noticed after reading it again is that there are too many simple statements. (Tim Burton ********. Then, he *********. He also *******.)
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Postby firestar_Recca_man » Thu Jan 27, 2005 1:35 am

Yea i know because i have to have a 5 or 6 page paper and i could not find that much on him and the pine creek high school qualities. so i blaber
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Postby WindChildFuko » Thu Jan 27, 2005 4:39 am

5 page paper on someone's qualities???? Nobody could do that without rambling!
"God Bless America" doesn't mean "God damn everyone else."



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Postby firestar_Recca_man » Thu Jan 27, 2005 10:30 pm

Courage excellence and intergery
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Postby WindChildFuko » Thu Jan 27, 2005 10:36 pm

those are pretty generic dude. I'd change at least two to something thats more specific to him.
"God Bless America" doesn't mean "God damn everyone else."



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Postby firestar_Recca_man » Sat Jan 29, 2005 2:10 am

yea
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Postby Shadow_ » Wed Feb 02, 2005 7:42 pm

Hey if spelling counts you better edit your paper a couple times. Or at least read it a couple times to make sure you have correct spelling on most words. For example:

The movies will be staring Jonnie Dept as the main person and the move will be called Willy Wonka and the Chocolate Factory. This will be a lot better that the first on. (you forgot an e at the end of the sentence.
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Postby WindChildFuko » Wed Feb 02, 2005 11:03 pm

well he just made that second mistake while typing, not writing, i think.
"God Bless America" doesn't mean "God damn everyone else."



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Postby firestar_Recca_man » Thu Feb 03, 2005 3:05 am

Yea i fixed that and thank you
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