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Postby storymaster23 » Tue May 06, 2008 10:21 pm

This is my story I am working on
DownFall
Part 1: The boy of fate
By Thomas Carver








Prologue

Long ago in an ancient world there was a mighty war between the lions of light, and the dragons of darkness. Many humans died in between the war. After the war was over a grand continent was formed, the name of the continent was Ishba. Ishba contained many wars on its soil. After the War of Leviathan, the first successful kingdom was created by King Arthur. The kingdom was called The LionDragon Kingdom, after many years of peace Aneroth; an evil warlord took over the kingdom. Turning it into an empire, he took over the rest of the continent. Five hundred years of his reign a rebellion rose up to take back the old kingdom. The war has been waging on for four hundred years; the war is nearing its end. Soon it will all be over………….






















Chapter 1


In a small village the men were gearing up for war, the all wore the crest of the Lion Army. It was a sad and joyful day in the village. The sound of crying women and playful children filled the air. As a man walked out of a house in full armor, a little boy came out chasing the man crying "Daddy...Daddy...please don’t go, please, please don’t leave me!â€

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Postby storymaster23 » Tue May 06, 2008 10:24 pm

Here is the rest of it
, everyone cheered when he was finished.




After that speech everyone was in their armor with their weapons. Mike came up behind Len, “Hey yo, look what I got my hands on,â€

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Postby Foomy » Wed May 07, 2008 12:35 am

is good stuffs i likes
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Postby erim_iris » Fri Jun 27, 2008 7:48 am

good read and the chapters flew by =) im happy with it.
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Postby DarkMaster2101 » Sat Jun 28, 2008 5:37 am

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