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Poetry

Postby Cyrus_Soulfire » Wed Sep 17, 2003 9:27 pm

What does everyone think about poetry? I personal think it helps you realize wh you are. I'll post one of mine from when I use to actually write it. (although I think it's a little dark, but honestly it really has nothing to do with me)





I just wanted to love you afore,
but now you don't adore anymore,
you and your philosophical ways only seem to turn me down again,
I lost interest in you long ago,

It is good to know the feeling was once again mutual,
just because I had it,
doesn't mean we'll have anything anymore,

Relationships are so largesse,
where you give unto the other without regret,
can't stand them because they give you a lack of nourishment,
as one breaks up another one starts,
leaving the pain to the person who only wanted to stay away,

Hatred has thus begun,
as one now gets jealous, the other one turns,
without the hesitation of the love that was once there for one another,

Suicidal thoughts now enter the mind,
of the poor fool who had been left behind,
after all, what can you do?
besides draw your own blood and watch your life go away,
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Postby Chris » Sat Sep 20, 2003 4:09 pm

Well, I'm not a poetry lover, but your poetry seems to be pretty good!

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Postby Cyrus_Soulfire » Sat Sep 20, 2003 4:17 pm

Thanks ^_^

I use to write lyrics and music a whike back also.

Now more so I'm just writing musical stuff on the guitar than anything. Wish I could play two instruments at the sametime though >_> (if not four)

Paino/Rythem Guitar seem to make up most of my music, then the lead guitar is just for flavor and the Bass adds to it... just need to learn how to play the drums =\
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Postby Phil » Sat Sep 20, 2003 5:55 pm

Yeah seems brilliant to me - look at my poetry in the fan stuff page - it sucks but i got 500 points for it!! Beat that!
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Postby Cyrus_Soulfire » Sat Sep 20, 2003 5:57 pm

I posted some other poetry there to ^_^;;

I already looked at it, probably better than the one I posted in the Fan Fiction part.
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Postby Phil » Sat Sep 20, 2003 5:58 pm

Yeah right - yours are good and i think for this one chris should give you 1000 gold - that would be helpful to your savings!
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Postby Cyrus_Soulfire » Sat Sep 20, 2003 5:59 pm

That'd be cool ^_^

but alas, an artists's life is a hard one.
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Postby Phil » Sat Sep 20, 2003 6:00 pm

Do you draw as well - or do you just mean the Author of a poem?
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Postby Cyrus_Soulfire » Sat Sep 20, 2003 6:09 pm

Phil wrote:Do you draw as well - or do you just mean the Author of a poem?


I can draw somewhat decently, not really that good. I am the author of the poem and I play and write music as well.
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Postby Phil » Sat Sep 20, 2003 6:45 pm

What Instrument do you play - I play Drums, Piano, Keyboard and a bit of Guitar (only tab) - I am very musical
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Postby Cyrus_Soulfire » Sat Sep 20, 2003 7:18 pm

Phil wrote:What Instrument do you play - I play Drums, Piano, Keyboard and a bit of Guitar (only tab) - I am very musical


Piano/Any sort of Guitar/little bit of drums/attempts to sing
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Postby Phil » Sat Sep 20, 2003 9:37 pm

Attempts to sing eh? I would probably shatter a window if I sung lol
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Postby Cyrus_Soulfire » Sun Sep 28, 2003 2:57 am

(I'm just going to post anything I do poetic/musical on this thread so I don't spam lots of different topics)

This is currently unamed and was inspired by the Heaven's A Lie by Lacuna Coil.




As everything leaves me,
I have nothing to feel,
scars that were left behind,

A new life now begins,
with everything the same,
will I be forgiven,

The answer that dawns me,
the very soul that I am,
will I really perish,

Answers that escape me,
that I couldn’t hold on,
now simply fly away,

As it is, I’m disgusted,
by who I really am,
if I could be trusted,

I need a hand, save me,
will I ever be free,
please come help me see,
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Postby Chris » Sun Sep 28, 2003 7:52 pm

What talent! :P

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Postby Phil » Sun Sep 28, 2003 8:19 pm

once again pure skill! I envy you! Are you/Were you good at Engliah in school?
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