My sin, My Prison (official lyrics - original)

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My sin, My Prison (official lyrics - original)

Postby Cyrus_Soulfire » Wed Sep 24, 2003 1:27 am

Ok, this would be way off topic but this is a song I am attempting to write, what does anyone think about it?


My Sins, My Prison


My sins, My prison


(Chorus)

I come faithful but not,
As I lay here bleeding from my thoughts,
I sin to never overcome,
what was only beneath my own heart,
to cold to see at night,
I can’t see the light,
wondering if all this time I'd been dead,
inside from everything,
as I reflect on my own sins that I sleep on,

(Verse)

Why can’t I wake up in this world,
I can’t seem to see in front of me,
can’t feel anything, yet so cold,
I am falling over dying,
from my own sins, my prison,
I can’t break out of,

(Chorus)

I come faithful but not,
As I lay here bleeding from my thoughts,
I sin to never overcome,
what was only beneath my own heart,
to cold to see at night,
I can’t see the light,
wondering if all this time I’ve been dead,
inside from everything,
as I reflect on my own sins that I sleep on,

(Verse)

laying down in my prison I can’t overcome,
dying all to fast on the inside,
not caring, not wondering,
maybe it’s just all a blessing,
falling down the hole of un-forgiveness,
that I can’t climb out of,

(Chorus)


I come faithful but not,
As I lay here bleeding from my thoughts,
I sin to never overcome,
what was only beneath my own heart,
to cold to see at night,
I can’t see the light,
wondering if all this time I’ve been dead,
inside from everything,
as I reflect on my own sins that I sleep on,


(Outro)

I want to,
I need to,
I have to,
forgiveness,
happiness,
my habbits,
Break it!
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Postby Shocker » Wed Sep 24, 2003 4:52 am

well...that's rather bleak and depressing...but i guess some songs are like that...
not my cup of tea, but I'm sure those into it will come clammering to adore you ^_^
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Postby Cyrus_Soulfire » Wed Sep 24, 2003 3:38 pm

Shocker wrote:well...that's rather bleak and depressing...but i guess some songs are like that...
not my cup of tea, but I'm sure those into it will come clammering to adore you ^_^


Well... guess some of my stuff tends to be a bit dark/angry/depressin even though I didn't mean it to, like this one. =\ Oh well, thanks ^_^
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Postby Phil » Wed Sep 24, 2003 6:35 pm

Interesting lyrics - what will the tune go like?
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Postby Cyrus_Soulfire » Wed Sep 24, 2003 7:11 pm

Phil wrote:Interesting lyrics - what will the tune go like?


probably something that sounds a bit gothic, I probably should actually write it sometime =\
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Postby Phil » Fri Sep 26, 2003 9:06 pm

Have you got Sibelius - that is the ultimate music writer for the pc I think. You should use that and see what you can come up with or maybe just strum a few chords on your guitar and make summit up i dunno.
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Postby Cyrus_Soulfire » Sat Sep 27, 2003 3:55 am

Phil wrote:Have you got Sibelius - that is the ultimate music writer for the pc I think. You should use that and see what you can come up with or maybe just strum a few chords on your guitar and make summit up i dunno.


-_-;;

Do you know of any free software by any chance?

*Edit* Nevermind, I found a demo version, let's see what it can do. (Sibelius 3 demo)
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Postby Phil » Sun Sep 28, 2003 8:21 pm

That sounds interesting tell us what you think of it if you get it working!
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Postby Cyrus_Soulfire » Mon Sep 29, 2003 9:43 pm

Phil wrote:That sounds interesting tell us what you think of it if you get it working!



Well =\ I'm not the musical genius when it comes to writing music out, though I do understand some of it. I kind of like the fact that I can add Violin and other things at the sametime. It's ok, I pefer the Hand to Ear method though, maybe someday I'll have a mic and I can record some of my things ^_^
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Postby Phil » Thu Oct 02, 2003 8:09 pm

This is the first step to going really big you know!
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Postby Cyrus_Soulfire » Fri Oct 03, 2003 10:28 pm

True...

By the way I just figured out a way to record stuff on the computer.

And as for me not understanding notation... it's not that I actually understand it and can minipulate it to what I want to hear... only problem is I don't know how to write it.... if that makes any sense.
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Postby Phil » Wed Oct 08, 2003 8:03 pm

not really lol
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Postby Naminé » Sat Oct 11, 2003 1:35 pm

I understand what you mean, CS. It's the same thing for me.

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Postby Phil » Tue Oct 14, 2003 11:57 am

I took control of sibelius pretty easily to tell you the truth - it's simple to work out!
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Postby Midian » Tue Oct 14, 2003 7:03 pm

a bit late, but: nice lyrics. bad that you couldnt sen the song -.-;;


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