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How awsome are my poetry skills?

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lufiamanaelf
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Very Bizzare Lufia TLR Limerick

Postby lufiamanaelf » Sat May 29, 2004 5:18 pm

Got bored after taking a dumb health class survey, this is the oddness that came:

There once was a guy with no brains,
Who was living a life without pain.

Then along came a girl,
Brought with her a whirl.

And all has changed since she came.



Yes...I know, my poetry skills ROCK!!! :lol:
Last edited by lufiamanaelf on Sun May 30, 2004 12:21 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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Postby SinReVi » Sat May 29, 2004 6:11 pm

Do more poetrys!
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Lufia - Curse of the Sinistrals
~ OUT NOW! 2010

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Postby DualBladeAlstadtMilitary » Sun May 30, 2004 2:38 am

It's good, but the rhythm seems to be off on the last two lines.

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Postby lufiamanaelf » Sun May 30, 2004 12:20 pm

Oh crud, yeah, I forgot a word! :P

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