Lufia World

[DarkMaster2101]

Hello again, I've decided to post yet another piece of lovely literature. Remember that random idea for what Ruins of Lore could of been as a spin off? Yeah, I decided to write down some dialogue in hopes it would be read. I originally thought of this as an RP, but seeing as how the RP is full of unfinished threads... Yeah, its strictly fan works.

Feel free to help me write the story. It isn't exactly a linear novel either. In fact, I think I should write this as more of a "choose your own" type scenario. I won't really have direct choices either, they are as free as ever.

Too keep me focused, I am going to try and publish each section once a week, input or not. Also, for those who want to help me write via RP a character. PM me with a few lines of that character and I may consider putting he/she/it in.

Well, take your seat, grab some popcorn, and remember to turn off all video recording, cell phones, pagers, Nintendo DS's, DSi's, PSP's, PSP Go!'s, Game Boy Advances, Wonder Swans, and N-Gauge devices please. Enjoy the show!
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Without warning, the island suddenly appeared in the sky. Four foul and wicked beings claimed it for themselves. They posessed the frightening powers of Chaos, Destruction, Terror, and Death. The people were horrified. They called the evil ones "Sinistrals". Their reign of terror continued. The world massed its warriors to battle their dark foes. But the Sinistrals were all powerful. In Desperation, the people called upon their bravest fighters: Artea, Guy, Maxim, and Selan.

The four brave fighters ventured into the Fortress of Doom. They slew the Sinistrals one by one: Gades the Destroyer, Amon the Fearful, Erim Mistress of Death, and their chief Daos of unruly Chaos. Just when the heroes thought peace would return to the world, the Sinistrals gathered the last of their energy. They focused it into a terrible wave. The heroes gathered their energies to counter it. Amplified by Maxim's sword, the Dual Blade, the evil waves were no more, but not without sacrifice.

Maxim and Guy remained unharmed. Artea however lost his sight, and Selan lost her life. Just before Artea could cast Escape, he and Guy were separated from Maxim. Maxim stayed behind. The world was at peace once more.

---The Legend of Doom Island

Somewhere in the Seven Seas in the year 17 A.F.W., seventeen years after the Doom Island War, a small fleet of ships bearing the Bound Kingdom flag sail to new lands. Prince Alex is on deck listens to Guy's words while reading from a scroll of parchment.

Prince Alex: "Magnificent! Truly magnificent, Sir Guy. This will be your best literature yet."

Guy: [Scratches the back of his head.] "Why thank you, your majesty. I'm sure this will sell better than my autobiography at least." [Nervously laughs.]

Jessy: [Walks up to Guy's side.] "Well considering the price of your rare and valuable autobiography, its a wonder it didn't sell at all."

Guy: [Turns towards Jessy.] "Right, so my math was a little off." [Folds his arms.] "I guess the exclusive Guy's biography will have to wait until the second edition when it hits the Lufia continent."

Jessy: "Guy?" [Places her hands on her hips]. "What makes you think that only two of the ten copies of your book only sold in Northland, the very place you were renown?"

Guy: "Umm..." [Brushes his blond beard.] "Bad marketing perhaps?"

Jessy: [Cradles her forehead in her hand.] "At ten thousand gold pieces a book? The only reason one of your two books sold was because the first one was given away as a promotion for riding Lexis's prototype ship and the other..." [Sees the prince standing perplexed.] "Oh! I'm sorry your majesty!" [Curtseys.] "Am I interrupting?"

Prince Alex: [Sighs and raises his hands.] "Well honestly you are..." [Rubs his chin with his thumb.] "... But then again you do have a baby on the way. Besides, as a prince like myself, it isn't my duties to get involved with a married couple's squabbles. So, I am going to return to my quarters for the afternoon. So I shall bid adieu. Keep up the good work, sir Guy!"

Guy: [Salutes to Prince Alex, then looks at Jessy.] "Five months already..."

Jessy: [Holds her belly.] "Stay on topic, Guy, please. At least let me finish.”

Guy: "Of course, my love."

Jessy: [Whispers in Guy's ear.] "Well I was going to say your other book was sold to the sucker himself, Prince Alex, but..."

Guy: "I don't think Prince Alex is a sucker."

Jessy: [Sighing.] "Oh never-mind... There really isn't a point to arguing now. Have you seen Jeros?"

Guy: "Little Jeros?" [Rubs his beard.]

Jessy: "Well he's not so little anymore."

Guy: "Well, of course. Kind of a shame that Maxim couldn't see how fine his little boy turned out. If it weren't for his mother's long hair and eyes, he would look just like his father."

Jessy: "But when his great Aunt Lilly died, he really had no where to go. Is that why he's with us?"

Guy: "Of course." [Looks up to the mast of the ship.] "Last I heard he was on top of the crow's nest watching the ocean." [Cups his hands and shouts.] "YO! JEROS!!!"

Jeros stirs in the crow's nest, asleep.

Lookout: [Puts down his binoculars and shakes Jeros.] "Wake up, lad. I think your friend's calling ya."

Jeros sits up yawning, and stretches his arms.

Guy: "About time! Are you awake now Jeros?"

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[DarkMaster2101]

Wow, this is what I get for being distracted by life. Some one else starts writing a direct sequel to Lufia II. *sigh* Well, before I decide to give up on yet another Lufia project I may as well finish this one.

Its only a little small segment. But seeing as I'm virtually the biggest heretic and needs to leave LWF and crawl in a hole and die, I may as well finish SOMETHING. Sorry for being an ass again.

I thought this thread would get SOMETHING going on. I'm killing the interactive part permanently. Its not going to work.

Enjoy.
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Jeros looks down the mast to find a blurry giant waving at him. Then after rubbing the sleep from his eyes, Jeros waves back to Guy.

Jeros: "Guy! Hello!"

Guy: [Mutters under his breath.] {There he is.} [Shouts back.] "Come on down, Jeros. Unless you're going to sleep all day."

Jeros: "No way, Guy! Knowing you, you're gonna eat my lunch."

Guy: "It was a waste of food, of course I did."

Jeros leaps from the mast. Swinging from line to line, he lands on top of Guy's shoulders.

Jeros: "Tell me, Did you really eat my lunch?"

Guy shrugs, grabs Jeros buy his shoulders, and tosses him over.

Jessie: [Is shocked from the force of the impact.] "Guy!?"

Guy: "You're going to have to do a lot better than that, scamp. Not even your dad could topple this mountain."

Jeros: [Rubbing his bottom.] "Ouch! You got me."

Guy laughs, and then pulls Jeros up.

Jeros: "Ha-ha... Say Guy, why did you wake me up?"

Guy: "Did you forget what day it is?"

Jeros: [Folding his arms.] "Hmm... Wait, is today the Royal Tournament?"

Jessie: "Yes, dear, the tournament is today. Actually, its suppose to start on deck in about five minutes."

Jeros: "Five minutes! I have to get to registration fast. I'm sorry, but I really have to go."

Jeros turns around takes off sprinting.

Jessie: "There he goes again..."

Before he takes 5 steps, Jeros turns around embarrassed.

Jeros: "Umm, Aunt Jessy, do you know where the herald is?"

Jessie: "The herald should be next to the Captains Quarters."

Jeros: [Sprints off.] "Thanks again!"

Guy: [Rubs the back of his neck.] "Geeze, sometimes I wonder about that child."

Jessie: "Why, have you not met Maxim when he was young?"

Guy: [Laughs.] "Yeah, believing Maxim or Selena to be that chipper is unbelievable."

Jessie: [Places her forehead in her palm.] "You know, Guy, that kind of speech is why you write so well."

Guy: "Um... Can we drop the critique?"

Jessie sighs, raising her arms.

Guy: "Then again, we were probably chipper when we were young too."

Guy stares out into the broad cerulean ocean while holding Jessie's hip with his left arm. Looking over the horizon, Guy dreams about the rest of his life he'll be spending while living in this new land as well as raising a family. It has been too long since Guy's thoughts were of settling down. Even after seventeen years Guy is always wondering about why the battle in Doom Island only he and his elf friend, Artea, survived. Nonetheless he must still remain strong, for another generation is on the way unprepared for the uncertain future.

Jeros may not believe it now, but he is not too far from a great adventure that will determine his role in salvation of this west land.

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[Guard Daos]

Hehe, nice! It's actually pretty fun to see two very different stories revolving around the same timezone get developed at the same time like this. You each have your unique styles, which makes it interesting to read. I like how you start with a more peaceful opening, it works.


And for the love of god, drop that everyone-hates-me attitude. No one hates you, and you're not going anywhere.
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[DarkMaster2101]

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*~Prologue Chapter: The Rogue in White~*
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Jeros wanders amidst the main deck of the Bound Kingdom flag ship, the Grand Orca. The flag ship is the largest in the fleet. Its decks are almost three quarters the size of Sundletan. Despite the ship showing its age, it is still one of the best built custom Dankirk warships in all of Northland. Jeros once asked his grand aunt why did Bound always import their ships. The reason he was told is that Bound Kingdom rests in a scorching desert with no trees. No trees calls for no ship builders.

A cross-wind catches the mast which shakes the entire ship. Jeros trips almost falling over. Despite the shock, the sea men on deck still stand flatfoot with crate in hand and returns to their duty. Jeros is always amazed at the sailors' balance against the oceans current, despite the rough seas of the past few months.

Jeros stands up and leans against the edge of the ship. Jeros looks out into the cerulean ocean wandering about his new life in the colony of this new land. It is not going to be easy like living in an established city of his childhood home, Parcelyte. On the bright side there is not going to be any curfew laws or guards telling him what to do now. However Jeros had to leave his childhood friends, Lemmy and Eldin, behind. They will not be there in the colony, nor will they may for the rest of his life. Regardless even if they tag along, colonial is suppose to be dangerous. Especially with the stray monsters running a muck lately.

Jeros: "Well, if the worst is monsters, then I finally have a calling for my swordsmanship." [Sighs and stands up.] "Who knows? Being a colonial guard isn't as exciting as a monster hunter, but if it involves battling monsters then maybe I'll consider it."

????: "It might not be the best, but at least its not a hassle."

Jeros: "Huh?"

Jeros turns sharply around towards the stack of barrels. Jeros thinks he hears a voice, yet he found nothing. Then Jeros hears another sound; it almost sounds like a cape flapping in the wind.

Jeros: "Hello!?"

?????: “........”

Jeros: [Raises his arms, confused.] "I guess it was only the wind."

?????: [Aside] {Damn, there's not suppose to be anyone here. I have to think of something quick.} "I know!"

The stranger pulls out what looks like a glimmering curved object...

Jeros: [Turns around.] "Wait, wha... ?"

...and cuts the ropes holding the barrels in place.

Jeros: "WOAH!!!"

Jeros rolls out of the way, dodging the cascading barrels.

?????: “Now's my chance!”

Jeros sees a pure white blanket jumping from the side of the ship. Falling down to the side. Jeros stands up and skips across the barrels. Then he looks down where the blanket jumped; he sees not a blanket, but a white cloak hanging on the side of the ship.

An naval officer and two soldiers arrive.

Naval Officer: "What's going on?"

Jeros: "I saw someone jump down here..."

Naval Officer: "Jump? There's nothing but wild ocean and sharks down there."

The white cloak kicks the glass of the ship's window and slides through. Whether it be instinct, insanity, or curiosity, Jeros jumps off deck and peruses her.

Naval Officer: “Wait Kid!” [Runs to the side of the ship and looks down.] "That window leads to the ship's cargo hold."

Soldier 1: "Isn't that where Prince Alex placed his treasures?"

Soldier 2: [Turns to his comrade.] "Yeah, and foolishly thinking that no one believes royalty never hide their treasure with the ship's supplies."

Naval Officer: [Stomps his foot and unsheathes his sword.] "I don't care what either of you too idiots think! Get down there and find that stow-away."

Soldiers: [Stand attention.] "Aye eye, sir!" [Runs towards the hold's entrance at the back of the ship.]

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[DarkMaster2101]

And so I bring you yet another segment to this chapter. In case you're wonder why I'm making a comment like this again. Yes, I just broke a sacred commandment by mentioning Eldin as Jeros's friend. :p For those who deny Ruins of Lore as apart of the Estpolis world, then ha ha to you.

And with that, POW! I'm gone

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Jeros tumbles to the floor; then brushes his brilliant red pony tail from his eyes. Jeros looks around the crates and barrels hoping to find what is hiding in the shadows of the hold. Jeros stands up, rubbing his nose from the musty sea salt smell. He has been on the ship for almost three months, yet he still can never get used to the smell. He sees the rogue in white in the shadows ravaging through what appears to be luggage bags. The rogue raises a translucent azure gem high. Dangling, the gem shines light it captures from the window. Jeros stands mesmerized watching the gem, and then he realizes that she must be a thief.

Jeros: [Shouts.] "I don't thing that gem is yours, uh... Whoever you are. Drop it!"

Rogue in White: [Snickers.] "Oh, I'm so afraid. Could you at least pick a better opening line?"

Jeros: [Turns red from embarrassment.] "Hey! I'm to be original, okay?"

Rogue in White: "Well whatever. I've wasted enough time with you. I shall be leaving now. Nice hair, pony boy."

Jeros: "Pony boy?" [Grabs his pony-tail, scowling from frustration.] "LEAVE MY HAIR STYLE OUT OF THIS!!! [Holds fists up, taking a fighting stance.] You better drop that rock or else..."

The rogue in white draws a silver crescent from her belt and points it at Jeros.

Rogue in White: "Or else what?"

Jeros: [Sweats and laughs nervously.] "Ahahahahaha..."

Jeros quickly looks around to find a large leather bag with a patch that is Guy's family crest. Sticking out of the bag was a hand length wooden hilt. Jeros breaks for it.

Rogue in White: "No you don't!"

The rogue in white lunges at Jeros swinging her crescent blade. Jeros grabs the hilt from the bag and raises it instinctively. Luckily, the long knife blocked the crescent blade in time. Jeros smiles and points the knife towards his opponent.

Jeros: "Ha! I have you know that I'm a talented swordsman myself. My father was Maxim after all."

Rogue in White: "...Who?"

Jeros: "You're joking right? You seriously don't know who my dad was?"

Rogue in White: "Actually... [Raises her blade.] Don't know; don't care."

The Rogue in White lunges again. The rogue slices away at cold steel. She cannot get past Jeros defense. She jumps back.

Rogue in White: "You're talented all right, at least against one blade.

Jeros: "Hah! You're never going to defeat me at this rate."

Rogue in White: "Which is why I always carry two."

The rogue hides the gem within her sleeve. Then throws her right hand out to reveal a second crescent blade. She smiles.

Jeros: [Sweats.] "That's... Dirty and could be a problem."

The rogue lunges again, swinging both blades. Jeros pulls back; his defense with a knife alone is not enough to break through the rogue's twin blade offense. Right when it seems the rogue opened her defenses, Jeros slices only to cut thin air. The rogue thrusts her blades and cuts Jeros left shoulder.

Jeros: “That was a dirty trick!”

Once again the rogue lowers her defense; Jeros cuts. Again Jeros is deceived, but this time he was able to dodge the attack. Again, the rouge feints, Jeros cuts, and she counter attacks.

Rogue in White: [Rubs her forehead.] "So much for talent. Chivalry doesn't win wars you know."

Jeros: "Just lower your guard again and see what happens." [Aside] {Darn it! I won't be able to last long. I have to think of something...}

The rogue in white smiles and motions Jeros to attack. Jeros lunges. The cloak dances around behind Jeros and makes a clean swipe. Jeros ducks just in time; the blades cut off a piece of hair from his ponytail. Jeros stands up.

Jeros: "Hah! Missed!"

The rogue in white jumps back and points behind Jeros. Jeros turns around to see random crates cascading.

Jeros: "Yikes!"

Jeros tries to roll out of the way, but the crate falls on him before he bent over. Jeros lets out a moan of pain and frustration. Then he sees the rope once holding the crates, clean cut.

Rogue in White: [Laughing.] "What's wrong? I thought you were as talented swordsman like what's his face."

Jeros: [Growls.] "What's his face? My father's name is Maxim. He, my mother, and the bravest warriors of the land gave their life to save the world from the all mighty Sinsistrals!"

Rogue in White: "All mighty Sinistrals, huh? They must of been as worthless as a batch of jellies if a 'great' swordsman like him can take."

Jeros: [Growls.] "What did you say?"

Rogue in White: "If your talent is inheritance, then he's just another ho-hum swordsman. At least that's what you're showing to me. And with no sword too. Just face it, you can't prove to me that you are a true swordsman and neither your father."

Jeros, under the crates, grips his fists so hard that blood leaked from his palms.

Rogue in White: "Face it kid. Even if you father was a god killer, relying on his name isn't going to empower you in any way. [Turns around.] In the meantime, I am wasting time with you. I do have an escape to find."

Jeros relaxes his hand and finds to his side a crate filled with cooking ware. He sees what looks like a metal pot lid. He reaches out for it.

Jeros: "My father. It's always that I am the son of Maxim and that is why I am important. Still, I can handle insulting my father's name, but to say I live for my father's name..." [Looks up to the rogue, smiling.] "Is a joke!"

Jeros explodes from the crates and rushes the rogue. The rogue raises her blade, but figures out that it is locked by a metal pot lid. With pot lid in one hand and knife in the other Jeros deflects the rogue's offense, forcing her to defend. The rogue attempts to feint again. However Jeros sees through the ruse and raises his shield. The rogue's crescent blade pulls Jeros's shield.

Jeros: "Bad move if you think that works on me."

Many times when Jeros was training with Guy, Jeros sometimes grabbed Guy's shield with an ax. Even though the first time Jeros succeeded, always after Guy released his shield causing the ax handle to recoil into Jeros.

After remembering, Jeros releases his shield. The pot lid flew into the rogue's face. The rogue yelps of pain. For the final blow, Jeros thrusts the knife into the hood of the cloak. The rogue's jumps back, avoiding the kill. Then her hood falls back, uncovering her face. Once Jeros sees who she is, time stands still.

Jeros can not believe it. A young girl with skin as white as the moon, stands in front of him. Jeros knew she is smaller than him, yet her shocked expression reveals to him that she is a child younger than himself. The rogue brushes away her wavy bleach white hair and nurses her concave left cheek with her light fingers. Jeros's blue eyes gaze into her astonishing pure red irises. The rogue thought that although her adversary was a bit too small for her taste, he does have quite a handsome face. If it was not for that brilliant red pony tail making him look even more feminine, he could be passable for being adorable.

The clear azure gem dangles from the girl's sleeve, silently shedding it's light.

Crash! The cargo's doors slam open. The rogue covers her face to avoid the sunlight. A small brigade of soldiers armed with spears and shields march down the steps. They surround Jeros and the girl; spears raise.

Rogue in White: [Gasps.]
Jeros: "About time you guys showed up!"

The rogue leap frogs from Jeros's back up onto the ceiling boards.

Captain: "Stop her!"

Rogue in White: "Fare thee well, pony boy! It was fun while it lasted." [Winks.]

The rogue then throws a small orb onto the ground. At first it spewed a cloud of white smoke. Then magical glyphs circle around her. In a bright flash, she vanishes.

Captain: "Hurry and find what she's taken. Once we get to the colony, then we'll order an investigation."

Soldiers: "Sir!"

Jeros: Stop calling me Poney Boy! [Crossing his arms, muttering.] {Pony boy?}

Guy jumps down the stairs and lands behind Jeros.

Guy: [Shouts.] "JERRRROOOS!!!"

Jeros: [Jumping out of his skin and turns around.} "Gah! Guy!?"

Guy, sighing and snarling, grabs Jeros by the belt, lifts him over his shoulders and carries him on deck.

Guy: "You and I are going to have a looong talk about this..."

Jeros: "Wait, uncle Guy! I can explain everything."

Guy: "And you will after I'm through with you, so shut up until then!"

Jeros: “Gulp.”

Guy: [Sighs.] "If you were mine, I would tan your hide here and now."

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[SinReVi]

Almost forgot to say: YOU SPELLED JESSY WRONG! =P *kicks darkmaster*
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Lufia - Curse of the Sinistrals
~ October 2010

[DarkMaster2101]

Just as I found out. I didn't know when, and I don't know why. But I do know sometime this year is your birthday! HAPPY BIRTHDAY SINREVI...

*sees incoming SinReVi's kick*

Oh no...

*Feels the impact of the kick, and cringes over. Holding his groin*

YIEEEP!!! *gasps* That... was... A surprise. *gasps again* And I went through the trouble of... Writing two scenes too. Just for you.

JUST FOR YOU!!!

*sees SinReVi's glare and nervously laughs*

Right, that's what I get for mixing "Jessie" with "Jessy". I forgot Natsume's "perfect" translation is never wrong...

Well, if Satan isn't calling me to hell, then I don't know who is. Well here is the epic conclusion of the prologue chapter! Now where's that ibuprophen...

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Shortly after the encounter Guy, with Jeros on his shoulder, opens the door and enters the Captain's quarters. Prince Alex and a small brigade of soldiers entered soon after. Guy sets Jeros down by his side. Guy then motions Jeros to stand attention; Jeros obays. Once Prince Alex greets Guy, he dismisses his escort. The captain commands his first mate to monitor the ship during his absence. The first mate salutes the captain and prince, then leaves the room. Prince Alex initiates the meeting.

Prince Alex: [Crosses his arms.] "I had no idea all this time we had a stow-away, a thief of one at that."

Captain: "I did brief you about the security of the entire ship. Our security did our best..."

Prince Alex: "Done your best!?" [Marches into the captain's face.] "If all your best is what it takes to allow such a clandestine thief to take the most valuable treasure of my ancestors then I clearly have mistaken you and the crew of this vessel to be the best of the Kingdom's navy!"

Jeros: [Muttering.] {Well, if you weren't such a stuck up fool, you would've stuck it up your...}

Guy slaps the back of Jeros's head.

Guy: [Whispering.] "Quiet!"

Prince Alex: "Is there something wrong, sir Guy?"

Guy: "Of course not your highness," [Glares at Jeros.] "At least not yet."

Jeros shrugs his shoulders and sighs.

Prince Alex: "I understand that Jeros is under your guardianship, but he's at least almost a grown man from what I heard. At least let me talk to him before you settle your domestics."

Guy: "As you wish, your highness." [Steps back from Jeros.]

Prince Alex walks towards Jeros, looking into his eyes.

Prince Alex: "Hmm... Well considering if we were still in Bound's walls, stealing another's weapon is quite an offense..."

Jeros: "You're majesty! Please understand, I was perusing the rogue in white..."

Prince Alex: [raises his hand.] "Indeed you were. Which is why you still have your right hand. Now let me finish!"

Jeros: [Looking down.] "I'm sorry."

Prince Alex: "However, with your attempt to stop this rogue in white we have obtained evidence which can be used to track her down."

Prince Alex places his hand on Jeros's shoulder.

Prince Alex: "I would've done the same if I were you down there. Nonetheless," [Begins pacing around.] "With this evidence, I know Asguard's stone can still be tracked down. This is where you come in, sir Guy. Once we reach the shore of the colony, you will meet up with the investigation team and aid them with tracking the rogue in white. If you aren't too busy."

Guy: "If with compensation for my services, your highness, then I will accept."

Prince Alex: "Of course, sir Guy. On behalf of your services to the world there is nothing Bound cannot provide."

Guy: "I thank you then. My hammer is yours."

Prince Alex: "Raising a family isn't easy. It is Something I'm looking forward to once I've returned."

Jeros's thoughts turn to the fight with the rogue in white. For some reason, he just cannot get her face out of his mind. The pure white complexion, the rouge eyes. Nonetheless the fight was an hour ago. Still Jeros cannot filter the things she said. She never heard of the Doom Island War nor his father. Could the battle of Doom Island, that costs his parents' lives, be only an echo in this distant land? No that would be impossible because, Parcelyte had strong communications to the Barony of Alekia, one of the most west most civilizations of the new land. Also, the island left a crater in an sub-continent north of Arus the fabled sorcerer's village, scratching that possibility out.

Whether she knew Doom Island or not, the rogues words though harsh are true. Nothing irritates Jeros more than being accused of relying on his father's name. Jeros was barely a year old when both his father and mother left him to save the world. He cannot possibly know who they were. Maybe Maxim and Selan are not these great holy crusaders who traveled the world to rid the gods who damned the land. The world's stories exaggerate them to be such abstract heroes and yet...

Jeros will never know them. He does know in the decision between himself and the world, his parents chose the world. In that sense, it feels like they've abandoned him.

This wasn't the first time Jeros thought about this. As much as his great aunt explained to him, Jeros still doubts if his parents' even cared about him.

"Even if you father was a god killer, relying on his name isn't going to empower you in any way."

Those words echo in Jeros's mind, taunting. Yet still... Jeros wonders why is he still clings onto his father's name? Could it be that because of the three months he spent with Guy's constant praising of him as the son of Maxim and Selan it is becoming apart of Jeros. Aunt Lilly never did love him because he was the son of a great hero. She loves him because he was her family. Before she died, Aunt Lilly used to call Jeros her beloved nephew, not some prodigy of heroic blood.

Prince Alex: "Then then once we board at the colony, the investigation shall begin immediately. Until then, search the ship all you can for clues. This meeting is adjourned. Good day."

Guy: "Sleep well, your highness."

Guy taps Jeros on the shoulder. For a second, Jeros did not realize he spaced out. Guy places his hand on Jeros's shoulder.

Guy: "Lets get some rest."

Jeros: "Sure..." [Follows Guy outside.]

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The entire sky is being shadowed by red clouds of dusk. The herald was at the center of the ship announcing the winner of the ship's tournament. Jeros had almost completely forgotten about it, but now he does not care anymore. Guy walks towards the edge of the ship. Gripping the ropes with his hands, Guy looks up into the sky. Jeros settles beside him doing the same.

Jeros: "Well, are you still mad?"

Guy: [Sighing.] "I was never mad at you. I was scared when I heard that you jumped off the ship. And not only that, but you also were in a knife fight against a Lunethene."

Jeros: "A Lunethene!? That girl was a Lunethene?"

Guy: "That girl? Jeros! She's was a Lunethene, the very same Lunethene that against the Barony of Alekia during the Seventy-Day Skirmish. The very same Lunethene who almost wiped out the entire army."

Jeros: "...So?"

Guy: "So you could've been slain easily. Lunethene are liers, back stabbers, and thieves that rely on deception. That could've been a trap! If you're father knew..."

Jeros: [Turns to Guy, shouting.] "Can you once not bring my father into this! I am sick of hearing about what if my father done this or knew that."

Guy: "Both you're father and mother died for the sake of saving the world you live in. They were brave warriors! I've fought along side of them myself, remember?"

Jeros: "Then tell me. Have you known my father when he wasn't fighting? What about my mother when she was a woman?"

Guy: [Grits his teeth.] "That's out of line."

Jeros: "You only think about them as warriors, don't you." [Looks at the sky again.] "For once I want to think of my parents as parents, not heroes."

Guy: "Your parents really are heroes, Jeros. But that doesn't mean they never loved you. There wasn't a second they never thought about returning to you."

Jeros sighs, and Guy moves closer to him.

Guy: "I promised to them and your aunt that I won't let you get hurt."

Jeros: "I'm eighteen years old, Guy. Isn't that why you started training me in swordplay? So I can defend myself as a man. I'm not a little boy anymore."

Guy: "I know. I just don't want you throwing your life away."

Jeros: "I understand..."

Guy starts running away from Jeros.

Jeros: "Hey! Where are you going?"

Guy: "I'm sure your dinner is a good as your lunch!" [Snickers.]

Jeros: "Not again! You always change the subject when... [Realizes that it is dinner time.] YOU'RE NOT EATING MY DINNER!!!"

Jeros turns around, chasing Guy.

Guy: "IT DOESN'T HAVE A NAME ON IT AND IT'S FIRST COME FIRST SERVE!!!"

Jeros: "THEN I GUESS I'LL EAT YOURS THEN!!!"

Guy: "YOU'RE GOING TO HAVE TO BEAT ME TO IT FIRST!!!"

As Jeros and Guy sprint across the deck, the sun blankets itself under the horizon. Just what exactly are the Lunethene? Why has she taken Prince Alex's ancestor's treasure? How long is it until Bound's fleet reach solid land? None can know what the future has in store. One thing is certain: The closer the fleet reaches the colony, the more eager Jeros becomes, and the closer the Rogue in White watches him.

As the sun rises, so ends another night watched by the moon.
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[DarkMaster2101]

Just in time for Christmas, I have posted yet another prologue. Will you have to wait almost three months before the next segment. Hopefully not but I can't keep promises.

Still, some more readers would be appreciated. I plan to post this on Fanfiction.net will, but it will have to wait until the next chapter is done.

---DarkMaster2101
"Nonsense was beginning!"

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It is a moonless night. The air of summer stands still as if itself is lost in the darkness. Though there is light from the stars, it is overwhelmed by the shadows of the woods near a ship building colony named Marse, a town floating on the shore. A white cloak dangles from atop of the trees. Within that cloak is a translucent azure gem shedding its light.

The rogue in white looks down upon the shadowed earth. A small pack of foxes scavenge the area, looking for food. Judging by their sizes, it was a mother fox taking her two young kits hunting. Even though the kits knew nothing of cruelty in the wild, they still had their mother. A empty feeling arouses her. Although she could sneak off with anything she wants, having a mother was something the rogue in white will never have. Nor she ever will.

She grabbed a couple of under-ripe peaches from the tree she was sitting in. And then she tossed them to the ground. The kits fled into the bushes, but then the mother turned around and carries the peaches to her pack. After that, the rogue in white returns her attention to Asguard's stone. Her mind wanders to the kid with the blue eyes and red ponytail.

Rogue in White: "He said that his father was Maxim. Could it be the same Maxim that the seers foresaw in the Great Conflict?" [places the gem back into her sleeve] "Even if it was him, he died saving the world from these 'Sinistrals'... So said pony boy. Still, I can't keep closed eyes. He was formidable, for wielding a knife. It isn't like I will meet him again." [sigh]

The rogue looks down upon the shadowed earth once more, and she sees a large brown-gray lizard stalking the bushes. It is a Zaraptasaur (commonly called Zarus), a carnivorous raptor like monster that is the size of a large dog with fangs sharp enough to pierce through chain mail. The fox was glaring at the Zarus trying to protect its kits. The Zarus opened its mouth, licking its teeth ready to eat, and charges into the bushes. The rogue then stood up and pulled from her waist what seemed to be a black metal shard. She then pulls a straight knife from her pocket and thrusting the shard into the knife. The knife glows as if it was absorbing the darkness around it. She throws it into the bush. The bushes scream, followed by a thud. The rogue jumps down from the tree and goes to the bush.

The Zarus is dead on the ground with a knife sticking out of the left of its neck, and warm blood gashing through its mouth. The rogue saw her effort in vein. The two kits under the bush can only huddle together, seeing their mother locked in the beast's jaws. She pulled the knife from the beast's body, skinned its left leg, and cut small pieces of meat from it. Throwing the meat on the ground for the kits, she wipes her blade clean.

Fearing dawn, the rogue in white ventures north west of the woods and towards the floating colony. The kits watch her wondering what she is.

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[DarkMaster2101]

Happy holidays and a Happy New Year. While I'm still in the past. I bring you the next scene!

---DarkMaster2101

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*~Moonstone Chapter Part 1: The New Land~*
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The ocean was glittering the red reflection of the pre-dawn sky. The sailors on deck from the night shift yawn from surviving yet another night of rough winds. The look-out on the crow's nest pulls out a telescope from his pocket and searches for land. Two soldiers are on deck heavily armed and clad in chain. They stand bored, frustrated from Prince Alex's lectures. The soldiers know that losing Prince Alex's most beloved keep sake means a heavy loss for the navy. Yet regardless, everyone make's mistakes. Being Bound's first royal navy to traverse the wild blue for the first time is an experience to pass on future generations. Naturally, Jeros would be out training early against Guy with his wooden sword, however they were advised to wait until after morning just in case a typhoon hit the ship.

The sun in the east barely crawled out of it's ocean's blanket before the look out called out "land ho!" Sailors gathered to the bridge. One by one they saw their summer voyage come to an end. It was a small town, floating on the ocean's shore and behind it a new land.

Then the passengers emerge from the ship's cabins. The prince himself stood right outside of his quarters soaking in the magnificent beauty of the viridian trees basking in the morning sun above shore. Guy and Jessy wakes up Jeros. The three of them went outside just when the Grand Orca was docking.

Jeros swings his bag behind his back and walked down the ramp. A legion of rag-tag soldiers stand attention on both sides, saluting to both Prince Alex and Guy. Guy salutes back and then grabs Jeros to his side. Jeros, frustrated, folds his arms knowing that Guy's only doing that to show off.

Legion Chief: [Raises his sword by the guard] "On behalf of the Guy Legion, we welcome you to marse, your majesty." [Turning towards Guy] "As well as to you and your lady." [Salutes] "Welcome back, Commander."

Guy: "At ease, chief. I'm sure Marse was well when I was gone."

Legion Chief: "We were there for the colony. Aside from monsters, there was no more confrontations. The Lunethene is no longer a threat to Marse."

Prince Alex: "Well, cheif, I wish I could prove you wrong..."

Legion Chief: "What do you mean, your highness?"

Guy: " A valueable treasure has been stolen upon our voyage. We will discuss the details once we're back at base." [Raises his hammer on his shoulder] "As for the rest of you, you may return to duty. Dismissed!"

Everyone in the Legion: "Sir!" [Salutes Guy and returns to their posts]

Prince Alex: "Well, they're certainly not up to standard in outfit."

Guy: "It isn't fancy armor or polished swords that make a fighter. It's their strength and courage."

Prince Alex: "Unlike a certain navy..."

Jeros grunts, shifting the strap of his bag.

Jessy: "Well they look competent enough. Forgive me for interrupting, but where are we going to stay for the night, Guy?"

Guy: [looks towards the west] "There should be an inn if you take the underwater tunnel south west."

Jeros: "An underwater tunnel? That's kind of extreme don't you think?"

Jessy: "During the skirmish, the ship builders used to use the tunnels underwater to access rooms at the bottom of the canal. So when the canal drains, they can repair damaged hulls."

Jeros: "I see. You know so much Jessy!"

Jessy: "I spent my time on board reading about the colonies instead of writing about them." [Looks at Guy]

Guy: "Well, well. Look at the sun. It's time we head to base."

Prince Alex: "I'm still fascinated from the architecture of this town. The Masons have done well with the canals too. But business does come first." [Straightens his cloak] "Take care, lady Jessica. And you two young Jeros."

Jessy: "Of course, you're majesty. And it's Jessy not Jessica."

Jeros: "Be careful not to lose any more treasure!"

Prince Alex: "Will do. Fare thee well." [Takes off with Guy and the Legion Chief]

Jessy: [Looking at Jeros] "Jeros, honey."

Jeros: "Yes, aunt Jess?"

Jessy pulls Jeros's ear. Jeros heels to her side.

Jeros: "OWE!!! OWE!!! OWE!!!"

Jessy: "Whether or not you like him, he is royalty. Show more respect or else you will be on the chopping block of the guillotine."

Jeros: "Ouch! I get it. But Prince Alex is like a cousin."

Jessy: "I am talking about when you meet another noble, or even the king." [Lets go]

Jeros: [Rubs his ear] "You're becomming more rutheless every day."

Jessy: "Well if you wouldn't mind helping me carry our luggage to the inn? After that then you can look around on your own."

Jeros: [Smiles] "You mean it? I'm not going to be watched sun rise till sun down."

Jessy: "Well, please stay in the colony at least. There are vicious monsters outside the village. I am not talking about jellies."

Jeros: "Well then it's a deal." [Picks up a large trunk] "Hhmmph! What does Guy have in this box?"

Jessy: "That is mine. It has my cooking utensils, wedding suveniers, my shoe collection..."

Jeros: "I get it!"

Jeros and Jessy carrie their luggage to the Sailor's Stay Inn via underwater tunnel. Aside from the humid, moldy smell the tunnel was well lit with torches hanging from the walls. Colonists were walking to the opposite direction with helmets on their heads, hammers in their belts, and satchels on their waists. Jeros sees the sub-canals the colonists are walking to. In a blink, Jeros thought he saw a familiar white cloak looking at him. Then when he looks back again, he stands still.

Jessy: "Are you tired, Jeros?"

Jeros: [Sets the trunk down] "Maybe I am... A little. Nevermind."

Jessy: "I see. Let us hurry then."

Jeros: {I swore that was her again. What is she doing here?}

Jeros lifts up the trunk and continues following Jessy. In the shadow of the hallway, red eyes glare into the light.

Rogue in White: {Him again?! This can't be a coincidence.}

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[DarkMaster2101]

I've been inspired after a half year of sulking to continue this story. When will the next part come out? Will it be finished?

I don't know. Reading and comments allways encourage me to write more.

...Please...

---DarkMaster2101

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The Sailor's Stay is not too fancy. It has very little decor to look at aside from a few steering wheels, photos, and the ever so calming stuffed great white on the wall (when Jeros sat down the trunk after he entered, he literally thought the shark was going to eat him). If one was not customed to the smell of sea salt soaked wood then the Sailor's Stay is not worth staying at.

Unless you decided to dine in the local cafe, then the opinions change. Shortly before Jeros left the inn, Jessy gives him some pocket change. Jeros heads first to the nearest cafe since it has been a while. Apple cider has never tasted so good in his life, well at least within the last six months.

There is a group of three sitting at a table behind Jeros talking to each other. Two were workers, one was a Legion soldier. The workers were laughing at the news of Asguard's stone.

Legion Soldier: "I'm not kiddin', ya guys! Both Commander Guy and the prince believe a Lunethene stole Asguard's stone."

Left-Hand Worker: "So what!? That's an impossible claim to make. It just shows how stupid we became on the home front about things like this. Every day we have to fortify the town's canals because of a huge monster that lurks under this hunk of wood." [Swigs his drink.] "I say, that it gives this oh-so-powerful legion of yours another excuse to not do their job."

Legion Soldier: "We have been protecting this colony since the day it was founded with rusted weapons and tattered armor. As for the monster in the canal, we have been tracking it for three months now." [Slams his fist on the table.] "Don't say we've not been doin' our job!"

Right-hand Worker: [Nodding] "He's right, Paul. They've been repelling monsters more times than you hit your thumb with a hammer."

Left-Hand Worker: "Pah!" [Swigs his drunk again.] "They used to repel monsters and the savages who tamed them five years ago...."

Jeros turned around from his bar seat, curious.

Jeros: "So what exactly happened five years ago?"

Left-Hand Worker: "Eavesdroppin' on us, are ya kid?" [Rubbing his beard] "Hmm... Haven't seen you around here before."

Legion Soldier: "Jeros? Is that really you?"

Jeros looks at the legion soldier with a dumb-founded look.

Legion Soldier: [Waves] "It's me! Tim from Sundletan."

Jeros: [Snaps his fingers, remembering the name.] "Tim? As in Timmothy? Well long time no see!" [Brushes his bangs.] "I've been getting letters from you, but haven't seen you in five years."

Tim [Legion Soldier]: "I've been surviving here and there. More importantly, how have you been Jeros?"

Left-Hand Worker: "Whoa, whoa, what the heck!? This little runts Maxim's kid you been talkin' about?"

Jeros: "Yeah. I'm Maxim's son."

Left-Hand Worker: "The son of a dead man... God help us."

Jeros: "Don't remind me."

Left-Hand Worker: "So instead of sending a relief of well trained soldiers, they send an old man and his woman, a pouty prince, and a runt to deal with our problems."

Jeros: "I didn't even know you had problems until I arrived. Sorry, but I came here because Guy is my god-father. He's here to find a home and settle down."

Tim: "It's all right, bud. The monster didn't even show up until two weeks ago. You were at sea by then so Parcelyte couldn't get the message in time."

Right-Hand Worker: "Say, I have been quiet-like in the background." [Stands up and holds his hand out to Jeros] "My name's Randall..." [Pointing to the left worker] "And this here's my rambling partner, Paul."

Left-Hand Worker: "I'm done here! I'm here to drink, not make friends."

The left-hand worker stands up from his seat cumbersomely and walks out of the cafe.

Jeros: [Looking at the left-hand worker] "He can make excuses, that's for sure." [Shakes Randall's hand.] "Pleasure to meet you."

Randall: "It's an honor to meet you son. I see great potential in ya too." [Sits back down.]

Jeros: "Hmm... So what exactly did happen five years ago?"

Tim: "I'm sure the news didn't interest you at the time. But since there's a Lunethene on the loose, well, it wouldn't help tellin'."

Jeros: "Stop beating around the bush, Timmy. You know you fell in the well."

Tim: "It's Tim now. Get it right." [Snickers.] Still remembering the well. Anyhow..."

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[DarkMaster2101]

Time to finish the first part of the Moonstone chapter! Oh yeah!

---DarkMaster2101

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'Shortly before the main fleet arrived with the colonists, we were at peace with the Lunethene. Because they were humans themselves, we wanted to establish trade. However, the Lunethene wanted nothing to do with our goods nor the knowledge of our sciences. For a while this aura of distrust discouraged colonial support. It also limited the land the colonies were able to settle unless we wanted to go to war.

Eventually a head of Lunethene affairs was appointed. Narseby Fairfax, the baron's teacher was the guy. He came up with an interesting idea that the Lunethene did not want the trade of any goods or services. Instead he told the Lunethen, stories, history, and events of our people.

He started this historical trade by telling the Lunethene about the Battle of Doom Island. The story about your dad obviously. The story of his heroics and sacrifice inspired the Lunethene to trust us a little more. They accepted by telling us their story. They told us the tale of a goddess of the moon who lived among them for thousands of years. It was said that one who would bring the items she requests shall have her hand and immortality.

Well, I don't know the details about that crazy story either, but I did know that Narseby was obsessed with the idea of immortality. The colonists searched high and low for within the land for these four treasures. They went as far as to burn Lunethene settlements to find evidence. However the colonists turned up with nothing after a year's search. Eventually this goddess had to return to the moon. And well, Narseby's obsession got to him. He sealed this moon goddess and prevented her from returning to the moon.

That's when the skirmish happened. The Lunethene were furious. The Lunethene believed that they were of the moon as well. By sealing the moon goddess, they believed that all hope for their salvation is lost. They know our people are capable of slaying gods. Maybe that's why they didn't attack us before. But what we didn't know was that they were watching us long before we arrived on the colonies. The Lunethene studied our tactics in battle; they know what we can and cannot do. And that is why within seventy days the Lunethene virtually annihilated the main forces of the barony.

Then the old man set up a trap. If he couldn't have immortality, then no one can. He lured the Lunethene to the top of the Glasdar tower. All of their best warriors followed one man with hatred in their hearts, seeking revenge for the goddess death (she was still alive, but I can only tell you what I heard). When they cornered the old man on top of the tower, poof! They vanished. Every single one disappeared before Narseby's presence. Strange that a twisted old man like him started the conflict and also ended it.

The Lunethene without their best warriors were easily crushed by our forces. Narseby eventually ordered the army to slaughter the women and children of the Lunethene to prevent future conflict with them. When the baron discovered that his colonies stooped so low as to perform a barbaric act of genocide, he dismissed the old man and ordered his execution.

Safe to say, the old man was hung the next morning.

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Jeros dozed off during the middle of the story, but regained his senses towards the end.

Jeros: "So you're saying that because this Narseby guy,” [Fiddles with his glass, with nothing but ice cubes in it.] “The Lunthene are suppose to be extinct. Like dinosaurs and dodos extinct?"

Tim: "Yep. I wasn't there when the old man did it, but I was there when he was hanged. And because of his crime, the barony lost almost all support with the mother country. Parcelyte and Alunze is no longer funding any future projects for the colonies." [Drinks from his glass.] "The only reason why Boundary Kingdom's navy is here because of their mission to escort prince Alex to the barony. The baron hopes that by merging their colonies with Boundary Kingdom's, he'll get support for the barony once more. Besides, Bound's colonies are bound to be well more supported than Parcelyte's in that sense."

Jeros wipes his brow with a table cloth. Because the barony is responsible, Parcelyte is indirectly responsible for the extinction of an entire race. That must be why there are no ships heading to the west colonies from Parcelyte. So Jeros thought.

Jeros: "The reason why Guy wanted me to go with him instead of staying home kinda makes sense now. But would Guy even comply with such an order?"

Tim: "No. Guy was no barbarian. The Guy Legion acted outside of colonial affairs. We were more mercs than soldiers. Guy only accepted missions to defend settlements. As for opposing to the Lunethene offensively, he refused. I heard the Lunethene respected him for his compassion to protect his people. He told their leaders that he respected them because they were doing the same. Of course the old man didn't like mutual feelings. He claimed that the by playing defensively, the legion was wasting their effort as the best of the colonial forces. He convinced the baron that this was our weakness. The Guy legion was eventually cut out of the war. The colonies never suffered more casualties than ever before. Even if the numbers showed what we've done for them, it doesn't matter now."

Jeros: "Why do you say that?"

Tim: [Taking another drink.] "There are no Lunethene left to advocate for the Guy legion. Narseby convinced the mother country that we were a mistake. Though the old man's plan back-fired a little. Numbers showed that we fought better than any soldier in the long run. Also, the skirmish was at its climax. And that is why the Guy Legion stayed in the colonies for the last 5 years."

Jeros closes his eyes, reflecting upon what happened 5 years ago. Even if there was at least one Lunethene left, the sheer fact that the people of his kingdom stooped so low almost makes Jeros vomit.

Jeros: "Hearing this makes the Sinistrals sound like holy gods compared to what we've done."

Tim: "Trust me,” [Sets down his empty glass.] “If the Sinistrals were still here, they probably would've done worse to them than what we have. Probably would've turned them into monsters or something. Although, they might have..."

Jeros: [Leans forward from the edge of his seat.] "Might have what?"

Tim: [Shakes his head.] "Nah, it's something I'm not suppose to talk about unless I want to get fired." [Standing up.] "Drinks are getting to me. The Sinistrals are destroyed. They wouldn't matter now anyways. I need to head back to base."

Jeros: "Fair enough." [Stands up.] "I'm going to explore town a bit more before I have to go back to Jessy."

Tim: "Ah, then tell Jessy that Timmy says hello to her and the baby."

Jeros: [Shrugging his shoulders.] "What ever happened to 'it's not Tim?'"

Tim: “It's Jessy.”

Tim leaves the cafe. Jeros then waves to the bartender. The bartender then moves to Jeros and collects his tab.

Jeros: [Whispering] "Say barkeep, do you think I can get a good look at this water monster?"

Bartender: "Water monster? Ah, if it wasn't for that brilliant hair I would call you insane." [Picks up an empty glass and starts polishing it.] "Well if you're dying to see it, I heard the monster tends to lurk around the sub-canals around high tide. Getting into the sub-canals is your problem. That's a restricted area."

Jeros: "I see..." [Opens his purse and slides a coin on the counter.] "Think you can keep this a secret from Guy and Aunt Jess for me."

Bartender: "Well, you need not to pay young lad. You're secret's safe, if you stay alive."

Jeros: [Replaces the coin back into his purse.] "Hmm... Generous. Thanks barkeep." [Stands up and turns around.]

Bartender: [Calls out to Jeros.] "Oh! One more thing..."

Jeros: [Turns around.] "Yes?"

Bartender: "It seems that a visitor earlier wants to meet you in person. She claims to be a very big fan of your and would like to meet you at the east pier at dusk."

Jeros: [Rushes to the counter.] "Did you say she was a fan of mine?”

Bartender: “Yes, when this girl heard about you fighting the thief that stole the prince's treasure, she went head over heels.”

Jeros: “Then what did she look like!? Her hair, clothes, her eyes."

Bartender: [Pushes Jeros back behind the counter.] "Stay behind the counter please. And what am I a pervert? No! You meet her at the pier. That was the reason and message. I cannot tell you more."

Jeros: [Rubs the back of his head.] "Hehe... I see. Sorry about the excitement. I better get going now."

The bartender sighs and nods, then bids Jeros fare well. Jeros gets up and leaves the cafe. Just before he takes no more than 5 steps outside, he remembers he doesn't know where the canals are. He turns around and finds the bartender busy.

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“Getting into the sub-canals is your problem.”

Then there's the girl at the pier. Already news of Jeros' exploits have spread throughout the colony. A fan for Jeros? Perhaps she knows how to get into the sub-canals. Or perhaps she just wishes to meet him for a date in the romantic sun set.

Jeros: [Smiling] {I hope she's very cute.}

Then his mind turned to the face of the rogue in white. Her pale skin, white hair, and enigmatic red eyes still linger in Jeros's dreams, even now.

Jeros: {What am I thinking?} [Sighing] {Aside from being the son of Maxim (which she rubbed in my face), she wouldn't have any interest in me at all. Why am I thinking about these things? I really shouldn't think about her.}

Jeros ventures through the west tunnel to the central platform. His mind wanders of who this person might be and what she'll look like. Once at the central platform, the afternoon sun slowly falls to the horizon. Workers are taking their leave to the cafe. Jeros stands quietly, looking out to the pier watching that one person to pop out of know where.

Then when Jeros starts to give up hope, he turns around.

She was behind Jeros all along. Under her white hood, she blushes. Jeros stands paralyzed, speechless.

Before he is able move his lips...

Rogue in White: “I hope you know how to swim.”

She nudges Jeros. Tilting him backwards until he falls off the pier. Jeros sinks, and for a few seconds he didn't surface. Jeros splashes himself above the thick oily water, gasping for air. The rogue in white dives off the pier next to Jeros.

Rogue in White: [Surfaces.] “Do you want to see it or not?” [Dives back under water.]

Jeros: [Diving.] {I wanted to find a monster, and I find you...}

Jeros is trying his best to catch up with the rogue underwater. If he wasn't going to find the sea monster, then he was going to recover Asguard's stone for sure. The rogue swims to the lowest anchor of the pier. Jeros then thinks this is his chance to grab her, at least it was before he sees the sub-canal...

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[Guard Daos]

Very well done! I'm very intrigued about the Lunethene. You told that story very well. I'm also curious what the four items were.
Also, I really like the rogue in white. I can't wait to hear what her story is.

You created more suspense and more mystery in this chapter. I look forward to the next part!
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[Anthony]

Well done!!
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